Night Mistress

This is very good. I can't wait to read more.

They turned around and saw stone statues. Susan and Lucy gasped at the sight. The Watcher surveyed the area intently and solemnly, examining every detail. She sighed. “They were helping ...

I think it's pretty good. I read historical romance from this time period and you did quite well. i hope you will add another chapter later on.

It's pretty good. Update another piece soon. don't leave us hanging!!!

In the shower, Serena let the warm water hit her, taking away the chill. Then abruptly her mind wandered, wondering out of the blue, if Kai’s embrace was just as ...

I like how you portray the emotions in this piece. One question: why did she take him back? Was it because of his good look or something else? I wouldn't ...

This was great! i think you should put up a follow up piece to this.

Serena was practicing her techniques, perfecting them...or trying to. So couldn’t concentrate, not without problems, as her thoughts kept wandering. I can’t concentrate. She finally gave up with d

It's good. I think you should continue it. Could you write a presequel to it? because some thing confuse me, like how long they have know each other and were ...

Peter knew he should’ve known better than to expect real comfort in a Beaver’s dam. It was cozy, alright, and a welcome respite from the cold. But it was cramped. ...

Neither knew how they came to the understanding, let alone the agreed decision to take time away from the others and train together, yet it happened, and soon, the two ...

I like it! Continue it soon. You're writing style is good. Be careful of Run-on sentences.

It's pretty good. Please do continue it. be careful and watch your tenses.

they are awesome! :D

I like the movie. It kind of inspire me to write something like that.